Sunday, March 9, 2014

Escape To A Place Sublime Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sitting here in solitude
Alone inside my mind
I need a bit of altitude
Need to feel that high
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Tim Vallie
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Valerie Dohren 16 March 2014

Short, but very well expressed - the need to escape from the realities of this world.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 09 March 2014

Minimally exquisite. This is the language which lifts poetry to a place of elevation. Just one tiny polish please. Because it has such a fine tone, this line needs attention. I need a BIT OF altitude. I need a LITTLE altitude takes it up one more level.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014

Great poem, I identify with it one hundred percent! My feelings exactly. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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