Escape Plan Comments

I told you I would return and give you that 10 I promised when PH fixed its voting booth... so here I am to give you that 10! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is necessary especially if living in high building! Escape plan even when read this i start to feel rush....luckily i dont jump out hahaha

Well, GRRRRRRR, I guess PH isn't accepting poem rating today.... GRRRRRRRR. at least they are accepting comments. I will make a note to return and give you a ten when PH is more accommodating.

Those abrupt brief lines fuel the fear and speed your reader out of that apartment, heart pounding, hands shaking, fleeing that smoke down the fire escape. Well done! ! ! I felt as panicked as if I was there. Hopefully with just such a plan. 10++++++++++ and a spot on my fav list