Saturday, January 24, 2009

Escape From Reality Comments

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Memoirs and broken dreams lay at her feet
She approaches them but they continue to retreat
She tries to pick up the pieces one by one
But as she reaches out they appear to have gone
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Yassar Ali
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Maryam Khan 29 January 2009

PERFECT! ! ! So sad and beautiful at the same time, a true masterpiece, I love it! ! ! Reading this really touched my heart and it made me think about doubts i've made, thank you so much for sharing! ! ! one of the best poems I have ever read....Great message! !

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