Wednesday, April 15, 2009

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Escape from the lies, that bring nothing but pain,
Escape from the cries, that pour down like rain.
Escape from the world that doesn't understand,
Escape from the people who pull you down like sinking sand.
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Brianna Townsend
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Vaughn Bekker 25 May 2010

good poem, well done: 0) hope you escape all the negative things that plauge you: 0)

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Ali Colby 23 April 2009

You can write about the feeling's we all feel sometime or another..good job bee!

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Nangula Immanuel 22 April 2009

Great poem Bee! ! i love the way you structured it, really well worded! !

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Silent Speaker 15 April 2009

WOW! ! ! ! this is such a strong poem. each stanza is so powerful. Well done! ! !

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