Escape from the lies, that bring nothing but pain,
Escape from the cries, that pour down like rain.
Escape from the world that doesn't understand,
Escape from the people who pull you down like sinking sand.
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You can write about the feeling's we all feel sometime or another..good job bee!
Great poem Bee! ! i love the way you structured it, really well worded! !
WOW! ! ! ! this is such a strong poem. each stanza is so powerful. Well done! ! !
good poem, well done: 0) hope you escape all the negative things that plauge you: 0)