Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Escape Comments

Rating: 4.9

These shackles that can no longer be broken,
When I’ve taken that path I should never have chosen,
These shadows that cast upon the cold stone walls,
They remind me of a time I had so much more.
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ben burgess
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Lynda Robson 20 August 2009

Great writing, keep it up, love this, 10 lynda xx

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Chesney Russell 19 August 2009

Well written Geeza, I'm sure your poets mind and imagination will get you past your sentence easier than without. They can't take that from ya.

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Catrina Heart 13 August 2009

Fabulous rhymes and nice figurative language used...well done! ! !

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Laurel Larison 12 August 2009

Very well written and expressed BRAVO

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Phoebe Allura 12 August 2009

I vote this one a ten!

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