These shackles that can no longer be broken,
When I’ve taken that path I should never have chosen,
These shadows that cast upon the cold stone walls,
They remind me of a time I had so much more.
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Well written Geeza, I'm sure your poets mind and imagination will get you past your sentence easier than without. They can't take that from ya.
Fabulous rhymes and nice figurative language used...well done! ! !
Great writing, keep it up, love this, 10 lynda xx