Sunday, August 14, 2005

Escape Comments

Rating: 2.8

One foot immersed
the plan rehearsed,
then off at speed
to do the deed.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 15 August 2005

Max I meant that fate quickly kissed and then went elsewhere....... H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 15 August 2005

Very sincere poem....

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Max Reif 15 August 2005

The 'she quickly kissed' stanza's a little confusing to me, Herbert. I get this one. (I'll read the other two you mentioned, today.)

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Mary Nagy 14 August 2005

Very touching poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary

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