Monday, March 14, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

My poem is much too heavy,
to place upon these lines
My pen, it vomits when I write
I tell my friends, I'm doing fine
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Bill Cantrell
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 March 2022

I asked the diary, give me peace, let my burden rest in you....great expression. In a nutshell, this is a poem just beautiful. Top score!

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2022

In such deep melancholy tone you sing but I know one day you're heart'll sing of light and inspiration again! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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