Sunday, October 7, 2018

Escape Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was just an escape
a dream, a fantasy
why can't it be more?
I lie here awake
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 11 October 2018

Sometimes a fantasy will fill life enough till the real thing comes across your path. Such a melancholy poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

This is really a beautiful poem on life and escape having touching expression. The beginning of the poem is so attractive. Thanks for sharing.10

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