Monday, May 7, 2018

Escape Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was an escape, the rings, the dress
The empty wordless caress
Do as you are bidden
Was a malady deeply ridden
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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2018

Oh dear this is what poets once told Just was never brave enough to be bold I do not know what the future has in hold Now when I am so very old Lovely stanza of a beautiful poem.

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Dheeraj 07 May 2018

When we give ourself a release, when we unleash our soul, then perhaps we meet the true being within us. My words are feeble for this poetry. I found it mystical. (10+++) .

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Agreed it is an escape. Escape from everything we see around us.

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