Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Escape Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was a much sought-after departure
from the barnacles of squatting boredom.
I packed up, took a taxi and squeezed
into the evening traffic crawling on the route,
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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

Life is never fully lived, waiting for something Makes it desirable, intense. Why think of escape? Very positive and cleverly drawn inference at the end of turmoil of thoughts provoking to be a escapist. The style of your narration of things is fantastic. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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