staring at the knife i'm holding
sharp blade so temptingly appealing.
memories so haunting, torturing
i'm just dying, dreaming of escape.
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Emotions can cut like a knife... Yet they can also carry the soul on a journey like no other... Darkness is not the only shade of light... Beautiful poem...
I dont consider this a beautiful poem. Not in the slightest way. It is troubling really. I don't want you having those kinds of thoughts. I may not know you, or know what you've been through, but I know those thoughts are not healthy for you. Try Jesus. He can give u the good escape. Life, not death. It is well written, I won't deny that, but the subject matter... is troubling.
Wow, a so sad, yet so beautiful poem. A great write as always.
Again! another well writ poem that i myself can relate to very well although i cannot foresay that everything will be ok all i can do is hope that everythings gets better and fast too ~Bella