Escape Comments

Well, I enjoyed the whole poem, including the final two lines. This is a beautiful piece of work, short and to the core, I like that.

hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx, Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..

hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx, Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..