Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Escape Comments

Rating: 4.3

Escape with a breath,
I am silenced.

The life so devine was not spiraling,
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Elizabeth Tyease Collins
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C Note 08 April 2010

Imagery, yes. I'm going to need to read through this a few times to fully absorb.

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of course nothing changes with your poetry...awesome work Tyease :) love the imagery and the wording in this poem and also the content

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To say the least, it's good. To say the most would take much speculation. I'm a little uncertain as to what this poem is about, but it does send pictures to mind as you lead with words. Poetry with many fancy meanings have never been my thing.

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Victoria Sheffield 30 March 2010

Really nice poem! ! The imagery is brilliant. And I like the rhythm of it too. Nice job!

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Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Lovesick (Ewing) , Nj
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