A moth or an innocent boy
Or incessantly talking toy
Caught helplessly
In a nature's ploy:
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A beutiful tale of life Spun around a golden light Told in enchanting verse, But, Doctor, you make me say You Too! Why a woman Always a flame - Have You forgotten the sordid tales Where married men have lured Innocent wide eyed girls Daughters too subjucated by threat It is not man or woman But, the evil fire of passion Uncontrolled and unnatural Which mostly arises from the ashes Of Inferiority, Love spurred Curdled and turning life sour! Evil has no gender - It only has a perpetuator. Awareness of the predator Created among the vulnerable May slowly put this evil on stay!
TITLE DREW ME WORDS HELD ME MOTH SMILED IN SELF AWARENESS YOUR POETRY IN THE FLAMES LIGHT WAS EYE CATCHING....
This poem could be very funny and pithy at the same time...but it needs work.
Yeah! I've met a con man like that. I refered to him as the sun.
It is very much related to practical life of humans specially men and it has a coincidence with my life though i did not go getting myself charred with love's plea.The poem is well written verses on true facts encircling life's dire consequences.A 10 from me Sir.
Beautiful flow, an interesting write...how many are caught or scorched in a flame being lured into a relationship - drawn to danger for kicks or investing life savings, and I could never understand why Moths are so bent on sacrificing themselves....
This is a stunning piece from uHitesh. So well written.
i don't know what i would say....just saying fabulous......keep writing thanks..i have no words actually to appreciate.......
Yeah, this one is great, explaining the facts of life, when someone really loves a person and ends up in tragedy.
That's another writing of amazement, Doc.. Great poem about delusion.. I like it..
Dear Dr Poet, A Great Creation of contemporary Importance with Physchosymbolic touch It was really honoured, Hats off to you sir, Regards, (Vinod)
I like this poem.. very nicely written ~Krista~
Enormous poem filled with ' glued to your seat ' atmosphere.Well done Hitesh.
A game of love..indeed a delusion.. And using a moth..is really impressive to show it... A passionate poem..emotional..truly..amazing... Thanks for sharing..A 10+++!
Another tale of a moth and a flame in which Miss Anjali have her own version. An alluring game people loves to play in the so called delusion of love. Is there any medicine to awaken those who stays in fairytale land? Guess even Prozac wouldn't help to cure this illness all in the name of love. This is a wonderful poem crafted with zeal. a 10+++
Sir.. your poem is as alluring as title... Eloquent and full of life.. Really awesome write. Full 10 Regards Kushal