Thursday, December 11, 2008

Erotomania-A Delusion Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.4

A moth or an innocent boy
Or incessantly talking toy
Caught helplessly
In a nature's ploy:
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Kushal Vaishnani 13 June 2009

Sir.. your poem is as alluring as title... Eloquent and full of life.. Really awesome write. Full 10 Regards Kushal

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Pandian Angelina 13 May 2009

A beutiful tale of life Spun around a golden light Told in enchanting verse, But, Doctor, you make me say You Too! Why a woman Always a flame - Have You forgotten the sordid tales Where married men have lured Innocent wide eyed girls Daughters too subjucated by threat It is not man or woman But, the evil fire of passion Uncontrolled and unnatural Which mostly arises from the ashes Of Inferiority, Love spurred Curdled and turning life sour! Evil has no gender - It only has a perpetuator. Awareness of the predator Created among the vulnerable May slowly put this evil on stay!

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Malini Kadir 11 May 2009

TITLE DREW ME WORDS HELD ME MOTH SMILED IN SELF AWARENESS YOUR POETRY IN THE FLAMES LIGHT WAS EYE CATCHING....

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Richard Dates 02 May 2009

This poem could be very funny and pithy at the same time...but it needs work.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 20 April 2009

Yeah! I've met a con man like that. I refered to him as the sun.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 April 2009

It is very much related to practical life of humans specially men and it has a coincidence with my life though i did not go getting myself charred with love's plea.The poem is well written verses on true facts encircling life's dire consequences.A 10 from me Sir.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 15 April 2009

Beautiful flow, an interesting write...how many are caught or scorched in a flame being lured into a relationship - drawn to danger for kicks or investing life savings, and I could never understand why Moths are so bent on sacrificing themselves....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 December 2008

This is a stunning piece from uHitesh. So well written.

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

great write...amazing delight...10 Ency Bearis

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 17 December 2008

i don't know what i would say....just saying fabulous......keep writing thanks..i have no words actually to appreciate.......

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 December 2008

modern style poetry! very interesting!

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Amit Jaiswal 14 December 2008

Yeah, this one is great, explaining the facts of life, when someone really loves a person and ends up in tragedy.

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Kite Remedy 14 December 2008

That's another writing of amazement, Doc.. Great poem about delusion.. I like it..

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Vinod Kumar 13 December 2008

Dear Dr Poet, A Great Creation of contemporary Importance with Physchosymbolic touch It was really honoured, Hats off to you sir, Regards, (Vinod)

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I like this poem.. very nicely written ~Krista~

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 December 2008

Enormous poem filled with ' glued to your seat ' atmosphere.Well done Hitesh.

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Min Sia 12 December 2008

A game of love..indeed a delusion.. And using a moth..is really impressive to show it... A passionate poem..emotional..truly..amazing... Thanks for sharing..A 10+++!

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Sarah Sisson 12 December 2008

You write with a lot of emotion...thank you for this one!

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C T Heart 12 December 2008

Another tale of a moth and a flame in which Miss Anjali have her own version. An alluring game people loves to play in the so called delusion of love. Is there any medicine to awaken those who stays in fairytale land? Guess even Prozac wouldn't help to cure this illness all in the name of love. This is a wonderful poem crafted with zeal. a 10+++

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