Thursday, March 9, 2006

Erotica Comments

Rating: 4.5

The old man complains to the psychiatrist
'I have a sickness doctor, unable to walk along the road
Whenever I meet a woman I see her nude.
Then I get convulsions.'
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nimal dunuhinga
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Ben Burger 13 October 2011

There is potential here

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Alison Cassidy 23 June 2006

What a delightful poem. Poor man. How sad. How funny too. loved it. fondly, Alison

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Charles Chaim Wax 09 March 2006

utterly magic the dialogue pumping laughter into the heart a wonderful poem

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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