Monday, August 21, 2006

Erosive Life Go With The Flow Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the poor visibility
the old Lighthouse stands.
Sun murmurs his usual prayer
'off for the day my dear'.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

Not too sure what this one was about but you have used your creative touch again! Love duncan X

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A finely penned insight into a world so different from that of us fortunates. I am taken by the 'ramshackle song' and with the way you play with light and darkness in the creation of this astmospheric, intelligent piece. t x

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Emma Johnson 23 August 2006

A fascinating slice of Realism. Beautiful description. Susie.

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Sandra Fowler 22 August 2006

A very skillfully painted word picture. The sun goes out leaving two needy souls to seek what can be gained from the largely indifferent night. Their music is a mood that will not be denied.. Take care, Nimal. Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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