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drooping willow trees, along a cold, lonely creek
praying to the river to not wash it's foundation, it's sweet soil away
to take from it's roots' grasp will fall deep down in the water to lay
sleeping in rot in the fast flowing grave
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You have a great landscape style of writing. Using the world around you as metaphor and imagery to get your point across. Some the pictures you create are just beautiful. Keep on writing. Its awesome.
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10/23/2025 9:02:16 PM # 1.0.0
You have excellent imagination! Keep it up! This poem really helped me and I hope it helped other people too