Friday, July 24, 2020

Eros In Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sits very still
in a grassy plot that will
soon be night, crossed with shadows,
pierced by shafts of piercing moonight.
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Daniel Brick
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Soran M. H 28 September 2020

Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness fading light all acknowledge me, and yet she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even in nearness? We are sharing this silence. We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.

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Smoky Hoss 07 September 2020

Tis beautiful indeed! Wonderful.

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Straight to my poem list.....thx

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Fantastic poem my friend. For sometime I felt as if I am standing there and witnessing the beauty of the nature and spring. Great imagery and flawless flow. Beyond rating.....1000

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Glen Kappy 05 August 2020

with this you summon for me, daniel, the ache, the pangs we can feel, at beauty glimpsed, part of what i reference in my newest poem " to swallow beauty." i've enjoyed this time with your latest poems. continue to walk in beauty, brother. -glen

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Sandra Feldman 24 July 2020

Feeling and mentally seeing this beautiful imaginary, imaginary film of poetic love.

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