Eros Comments
Eros in dance divine love descending
Proudly possessive ecstatic transforming
Eternal joy fulfilling relentlessly spreading
Body and soul intimately growing
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Very vivid and expressive. You are a fine wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra
good composition on Eros, Mark...beautiful selctive use of words in the construction of the lines...good piece...10
What an enjoyable rush of words! This is very nice, Mark. Larry Beck
Eros - that - А mmur, that Cupid.... the son - one version Zeus and Aphrodites... Good compositions... Without love all loses thought... And the god himself is love....mark, Perfectly write...10... Bst wishes, Tsira
Very interesting choice of words, Mark, while taking us on a refreshing journey. Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, marilyn
Great alliteration of words.With a very visible single handed rhyming end lines in each stanza...ing and ive throughout...Fine theme 10+
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Golden lines from golden emotion…chiseled by golden tool… Thanks Sir… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK