Thursday, February 28, 2008

Ere Her Limbs.. Comments

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ere her limbs frigidly,
stiffen too rigidly,
decently kindly,
smooth and compose them,
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Farah Shaikh
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Micheal Udenyi 28 February 2008

quite cool rhymes and rethym but still cant get the message

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shel cope 28 February 2008

Rythm and feeling combining well here....well done u! ~s

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