Thursday, August 30, 2012

Eraser. Comments

Rating: 4.3

There is the pencil to commits mistakes
The eraser is there to remove distastes.
Each time untouched breath is induced
And happiness with gaiety is introduced.
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Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 31 August 2012

wonder such memories pass away leaving deep scars on white paper of life making it even torn yet the bright vision to erase the mistake with hopeful hopes and moving forward to write more absorbingly at every phase with undeterred passion of living............possible with all values of life..........simply by the art of living.........art in life...........for life........with an eraser........i enjoyed it! !

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Robert Roberts 30 August 2012

good work man time we appreciate our tools beside the pencil

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Shahzia Batool 30 August 2012

A simple object of common use is used for a purpose....very different & unique!

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Captain Cur 30 August 2012

My eraser has been getting a lot of use as of late. Excellent poem.

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Valerie Dohren 30 August 2012

There are many things which should be erased in this world if it were possible - very good write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 August 2012

a beautiful concept! If we have the biological eraser, we can easily erase our unwanted memories! an interesting poem!

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Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani

Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani

Mumbai, India.
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