Thursday, January 26, 2012

Erase You Comments

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I try
but your always there
I can't stop thinking about you
your on my mind 24/7
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keyshia loveless
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Victoria Gauci 26 January 2012

Keyshia, this is a very beautiful poem. It really expresses your longing. My favorite lines are You've eased your way in, now you're not getting out. A very good write. Keep it going.

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