Sunday, May 17, 2009

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how can we treat each other this way
forever shall we live
in peace or war
some belive in the impossible
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Jessica Caswell
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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Nice poem but I agree with George that some people are equal and some are even more qualer than others.

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George F. Hunter 17 May 2009

Good poem. It's too bad but in this world it seems that some end up being equaler than others.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

you are very visible, alive and living indeeed..your words speaks a lot...as long as you r lining in the site...we ll always visit you...great poem Sweet 10++

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Smiley Hooker 17 May 2009

although some egoistic chauvinists do really exist, people must remain equal to one another just as God wanted us to be. great poem my dear!

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Christopher Lee 17 May 2009

essence of Bhagavad Gita has been given in a simple but great poem Jessica all the best

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

that is a good poem you are expressing your self on how you feel in life and i like that in poems...expressing your true deep feelings in the words you write down...

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 May 2009

I am 100% with you here, this has been the windmill I am fighting against for years - there is nothing more hurtful by being treated as invisible - even a smile would warm an empty stomach.

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Akram Saqib 17 May 2009

yes every body is equal in this world of fame and fortune but man has divided himself into many caategories

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