Monday, July 6, 2009

Equality Comments

Rating: 5.0

last spree of apologies
hemorrhaged a lot alongside ego
sense to lasso in coherence eloquence
lost….
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Rehan Hyder
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Marieta Maglas 20 July 2009

a perfect description of equality in this rational poem.Extremely beautiful, Rehan.Thank you for sharing..10+++ from me

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 16 July 2009

wow...mayhem that runs rampant in a mind that is laden with giult and burdened with the hopelessness of loss the cause and blame for which lies upon it's own consience...

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Adi Cox 11 July 2009

A poem of personal struggles. Trying to find the right words, the right expression to smooth over a relationship is my interpretation of this poem. Feelings here are well expressed.10/10.

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