Sunday, July 21, 2013

Equality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Superior?
Is that what you think you are?
Superior! ?
because your skin is lighter?
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survi sharma
COMMENTS
Jaya Mishra 25 August 2013

Great messege nicely put. I liked how you presented not only one but both the discriminations prevaling in society... just because your hair is shorter.... Liked this one! ! Keep going.... Best of luck! :)

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

we all are equal what a great message it contains

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Malini Kadir 06 August 2013

voice ed with rage, voiced loud and clear.....boils the mind... reading too.....

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Ankit Sharma 03 August 2013

nice poem we all are equal as has been made by the same god

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R.j. Wynn 03 August 2013

It is very lonely in a lie.

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Good poem.Final surrender? Surrender with disgust is not equality.Any superior will bow down if wise. The right knowledge will convince ones ignorance.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 July 2013

my sentiment exactly, powerful write Survi, we all are equal in the eyes of the Maker. Siya_! !

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~ Jenie~ 26 July 2013

every human being has its own guts powerful delievered message with a clear cut words

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Hazel Durham 25 July 2013

Superior is a feeling of self importance that is so inflated until somebody sensible sticks a pin in all that hot air! ! Equality is freedom for everybody! ! Powerful write! !

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Hazel Durham 25 July 2013

Superior is a feeling of self importance that is so inflated until somebody sensible sticks a pin in all that hot air! ! Equality is freedom for everybody! ! Powerful write! !

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Shila Sinha 25 July 2013

all human beings are same irrespective of their caste, creed, gender and religion, i believe. only differs in thinking.

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Ramesh Rai 24 July 2013

No superiority. Anybody feeling superior suffers from inferiority complex.

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Anamika Jalan 23 July 2013

yeah, world should have equal eyes for everyone a great and eye opening poem...

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Indranil Bhaduri 23 July 2013

A nice write in a sarcastic way about the evil named 'Racism'.. Great job.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2013

No superiority. Anybody feeling superior suffers from inferiority complex.

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Heather Wilkins 22 July 2013

I thought we were are all equal we all come in this world the same way we will all leave the same way. I think this makes us all equal. nice poem

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Vishal Sharma 22 July 2013

the question of the devil racism is quite praiseworthy over here

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