Saturday, March 3, 2012

Equality Comments

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Water pours down, the drops spread apart
The flow runs together and unity starts
One big mistake is thinking the drops are alike
When equality is not the unity's strife
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Merlene Campbell
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Plague Rose 11 February 2013

I love this poem. You're a very good poet.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 March 2012

This is a very profound poem (added to my favorites) and I find the universal meaning of humanity in it, plus the inequality of status for some are rich and powerful, while some are poor and hopeless. Great piece of writing! Bravo!

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Merlene Campbell

Merlene Campbell

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