~ EPITAPOETRY ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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You have a grasp over language which should be admired. Unique style!
the first thought that sprung to mind was a crying baby.
BUT NOT IN HEART... HEATRS ARE… WORDLESS… TRUSTLESS... HUMURLESS... PARCHED SAND... WHY...? ? ? SHE CARES NOT TO KNOW…! Different style for you, I love this exchange of words. Great write which really makes one think about what you say. Thanks for sharing.
Epitapoetry is stylistic expression rendered in form. So many styles play upon poets for poetic expression. 'Mourn Needless Loss' is the stillborn poems not written. Therefore my comment will be a poem in choice mood read into it as the will or muse moves... Cosmic Candles Wax Poetic mind melt into sensation quickening energy elastic restless vibrations explode flow river streams waves seas engulf swallow id ego current tossed womb liquid warmth dark surge wordless muse exists saturated image void bio bytes expand shape form breach conception irk rise fall thought codes case uni-language mainstreams heartbeats rebirth melting poetics birth verse renewal word script life lit flickers Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Well played beat girl, Mother of words foreign and wonderful!
a woman seeking a true conversationalist not for a moment but for a lifetime. one that will inspire and nurture her poetic pulse as well as her mind. am i close or way of the mark. a very enjoyable thought provoker. well done
i read this like i'm in an orchestra and i direct the flow of the music.... like an action star here... nice write!
Niv, what can I possibly say that so many other poets have said: Knowledge is not a privilege, but a virtue given to us by the Mighty One to share with the rest of the world and you have done that exactly.. These are not simply words coming from a barren lips but from the bottom of your heart...God Bless You! Love and Peace...10+++
She is melting... Like dichotomous Candle... superb expression... Skillfully assembled feelings with word...your poems reverberate and cling those magnified aspect that only few poet adhere... Profound work.10+++
Poetry well designed with satire in question HEATRS ARE… /WORDLESS…/TRUSTLESS.../HUMURLESS... /PARCHED SAND.../WHY...? ? ? Climaxed in UNDECIDED LAST LINE… /'EV’RUNBORN EPITAPOETRY' /BYTES AFTER BYTES…/NIGHTS AFTER NIGHTS…! Is it a subtle message of low readers’ interests to poetry of low quality poetries Indeed dwindling vibes of finer aesthetics are concern for poets and awakened readers. 10++
Indeed we’re at a cross-road and fingers are crossed Simplicity in thought, unalloyed feelings, unblemished emotion and over all concocted well tailored interpersonal reaction… We forgot to laugh full chested full of vertical or horizontal forehead creases We’re after what we don’t know except effortless bucks without professionalism Where we’re leading us to this question Poet has raised HEATRS ARE… /WORDLESS…/TRUSTLESS.../HUMURLESS... /PARCHED SAND.../WHY...? ? ? This why we’ve to find out like Poet we’re [believer of morale –vide above] leading us where or no where This is my 2nd contemplative comment as I feel necessary to place before all walks of life… Thanks all for patience reading
niv, you take a bold venture every time you pen a poem, I appreciate your honesty in your work. Your poem questions the life of poetry....'poetry in breast looking for a 'love womb' to be embryoed again. Great job this poem deserved a 10+++[ altho many times my votes do not register on PH, still, you get my vote verbally]
Like Ms. Nivedita all poets are concerned about hearts are ‘Wordless’ ‘Trustless’ ‘Parched’ becoming why? Who’ll write Epitapoetry? A challenging job …new style and concept… Dr. V.
excellent philosophical poem, Niv, I love your style 10/10/10
Poet fantasized ideated envisaged and made readers to hallucinate [at least to me] in a horizon undiscovered and unexplored [well poets are destined for that] UNDECIDED LAST LINE… /'EV’RUNBORN EPITAPOETRY' /BYTES AFTER BYTES…/NIGHTS AFTER NIGHTS…! ..’ The band of Ms. Nivedita I’m getting acclimatized but without radar where finality is…as in this poem…lol… Terrific packed with detonator…to explode into rapture of poetic sojourns…bytes after bytes and nights after night… 10++ PS enjoyed word-coupling EPITAPOETRY
A poem gushing with the finesse of a confident artist.........loved the style.....Thank you for sharing....10++++
vow.what a poem and what style.nonstop adoration written with great style and is exciting too.great write voted10 surya
vow.what a poem and what style.nonstop adoration written with great style and is exciting too.great write voted10 surya
Juggled with words..... more to the ..... light & shade! ! !