Sunday, June 28, 2015

Epitaph For Love Comments

Rating: 0.0

I only wanted kitchen curtains
And your love
Both to calmly sway
In the sunsetting breeze of June
...
Read full text

Susan Lacovara
COMMENTS
Seamus O Brian 21 November 2016

The haunting of the everyday artifacts of routine living so effectively highlight the pain and emptiness of a broken heart. Simply superb; sent a chilling wave of resonance back into the deep chambers of my heart where a few scars lie dormant. To love, and its aftermath! :)

0 0 Reply

Impressive crafting, Susan...Your short, crisp and tight linage creates a stanzaic structure that moves mellifluously throughout the work...Solid Penning ~FjR~

0 0 Reply
Sekharan Pookkat 28 June 2015

sorrows stains in heart as blood stains in clothes- good penning

1 0 Reply
Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

New York
Close
Error Success