I only wanted kitchen curtains
And your love
Both to calmly sway
In the sunsetting breeze of June
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Impressive crafting, Susan...Your short, crisp and tight linage creates a stanzaic structure that moves mellifluously throughout the work...Solid Penning ~FjR~
sorrows stains in heart as blood stains in clothes- good penning
The haunting of the everyday artifacts of routine living so effectively highlight the pain and emptiness of a broken heart. Simply superb; sent a chilling wave of resonance back into the deep chambers of my heart where a few scars lie dormant. To love, and its aftermath! :)