Epitaph Comments

Wow, this you write this for me too? I can relate to your sentiments... too real for me in fact... and you expressed the emotions of passiveness beautifully... Good job buddy! Indeed this is one good poem of introspection. Thanks for sharing! Eric

a good introspection well expressed...the only thing I suggest in the stanza 9 is something I can't comprehend...probably you want to write or say...my greatest regret is this....and stanza 10 can be...Should by chance, today.....that's only my suggestion...otherwise nothing more I noted...and the contents is beautiful...9