Monday, May 18, 2009

Epitaph Comments

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Shall I ever have a grave?
After the journey to me you gave
Shall I enter heaven’s gate
Or see the sign –ITS TOO LATE! !
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Nikunj Sharma
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 October 2009

Well addressed Sir. A beauty. My epitaph I’d prefer to inscribe, ‘Epitaph of worthless wordless’. Ten Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite read and comment on my poem Why Hack My She niv

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Rehana Nazli 21 August 2009

Through the paper and the ink; I created many a link. Blooming life and the Brink; Creating a world in whatever I think. A moving piece of reality that we share together as sensitive souls. you do make a link and make it very strong. Thanks again for such a beautiful poem Niks. Rehana 20/8/09

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Deborah Cromer 02 July 2009

I read this one too. I noticed you write in question. Try instead of question, maybe write something where you have the answer. Instead of 'Will I'? Try ' I Will'. Turn it around and take control. Know the answers. Your readers can't answer things for you. You are the writer. :) You have the control. Just a friendly suggestion! DC

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Gert Strydom 12 June 2009

At times with the passing of years we all ask these questions. Very well written.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 May 2009

Nicely you have discussed your thought about your own epitaph. What should do, o it is touchy!

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