Sunday, December 19, 2010

Epiphyte Not Epitaph Comments

Rating: 5.0

This canopy has choked out the light
making the forest of life redundantly obscure.
a coffin for my home; where trees form walls,
confining me to this empty space.
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Edwin Baldwin
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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 December 2010

WHERE I AM A CURSED DUCK WITH ONE WING STUCK ON A FENCE.......... Much....much you have told for us who are simply campassing on the space and surface to live and not to live. Topographical beauty is spectacular. If I forget this writing, memory will not be able to erase out the memory of Epiphyte not Epitaph. Can't bear the pain you have drawn by imagery...can't bear.....one wing cursed duck....... But the last line get again a bit relieve...... TIME IS LEFT ON THE LEASE, / BUT I HAVE ALREADY VACATED GONE AWAY - AWAY LIKE THE SUN Well done, Poet, LIVE LONG FOR US who are really very sick in living....... Regards, pranab 10++++

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