Having forsaken all paths open to me
I come to you
Always.
And when for a while I am with you
...
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Yet another deeply profound work Naseer. I felt a sense of relief on your behalf at the end - to die at last.... Mark
You have reached the epilogue and i have always felt that i am still in the prologue, this sitting is so well descrbed here with firmness for the moment is too intense, , very well penned, ,
Your rich use of simile and metaphor enhance the aesthetic value of this rarely beautiful piece. Exceptional, Naseer. Your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
Awesome poem great work i couldn't have wrote it better thank you for sharing Please when you get a chance read some of my poems especially the ones called: Everyone turns away and All my life Thank you and God bless
‘…Soaking yourself in the warmth/Of a tête-à-tête….’ We readers are in tête-à-tête….with your imageries… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK