Monday, November 3, 2008

Epilogue Comments

Rating: 4.9

Having forsaken all paths open to me
I come to you
Always.
And when for a while I am with you
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 April 2010

‘…Soaking yourself in the warmth/Of a tête-à-tête….’ We readers are in tête-à-tête….with your imageries… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Yet another deeply profound work Naseer. I felt a sense of relief on your behalf at the end - to die at last.... Mark

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 January 2009

You have reached the epilogue and i have always felt that i am still in the prologue, this sitting is so well descrbed here with firmness for the moment is too intense, , very well penned, ,

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Tom Golding 16 December 2008

An ancient theme handled in a refreshing way.

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Sandra Fowler 06 November 2008

Your rich use of simile and metaphor enhance the aesthetic value of this rarely beautiful piece. Exceptional, Naseer. Your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Ency Bearis 03 November 2008

wonderful poem..greatly written..A10 Ency Bearis

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Awesome poem great work i couldn't have wrote it better thank you for sharing Please when you get a chance read some of my poems especially the ones called: Everyone turns away and All my life Thank you and God bless

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