Epidural In White Comments

Hey, Neal! For me it took a second reading before I got a sense of the scene. As always, I appreciate your fresh wording. This poem leaves me curious about the story behind it. Hoping this finds you well, Glen

Wow awesome wording here, and your phrasing is ESP creatively crafted! ! ! I ESP admire how u wrote, barnacled stern and limousined, . Sublime eloquence in mod style. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again, do add your thoughts/comment on my newest poem too titled, mirage surprise

The interlocking of images is most riveting allied to an excellent rhythmic flow of the verse. A sad and powerful picture emerges.

Seamus, an imaginative poem that has great imagery.++10