Envy Comments

Very nice poem except for the typo on line five: my feet were all beeding I'm sure that should be my feet were all BLEEDING.

Now, that was cute. Surprise sending. Trymine _ If Only _ Adeline

I can only hope this was not autobiographical - what a waste her short life would have been. Absolutely top-notch comments below on this poem

Envy! Seeing it everywhere around! What a pity for people! Great poem!

Envy is one of the six vices God had embedded in human, His off spring, to keep his feet on ground and to make him realize that he can not compete with his Creator, in spite of intellect given by Him to human. Very nicely elaborated. Thanks for sharing.10+++

So nicely penned a common obstacle.. one of those that prompted me to scratch How To Stay Happy? : -)

Oh this was so wonderfully written poem with satire in it....We all Envy in human form.........100++

Envy.. can be so debilitating.. but being human one cant help compare especially some one next to you gets all the advantages that destiny can shower and you are left comparing all through your life.. thanks for sharing.

...........truly this is a great write....and envy is the perfect title...enjoyed..