Tuesday, December 23, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

Once upon a time on a warm sunny day
The snake has been chasing the butterfly,
Trying to catch her on its flying way.
The color of sunshine on the wings of flight,
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Larisa Rzhepishevska
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I just started to wonder how Larissa could predict things with such clarity. But, then, a poet is a Prophet. Top score and Myfav

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Lovely story, beautifully crafted as a marvellous poem. Loved. I think, this is exactly what happened on the 24 February 2022. As the heart of the poet (as I read between the lines) was with the butterfly, the entire world stand with Ukraine. Still, Snake has his day!

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Larisa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 January 2015

thanks for sharing your poem, Larisa! Have a bright 2015! P.S.: Maybe you'll try one of mine..

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Larisa Rzhepishevska

Odessa, Ukraine
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