Sunday, December 7, 2008

Envision Comments

Rating: 4.6

If the sky was green and the grass was blue,
And the sun was black and the water was white,
And the earth would flip every hour, and the moon would flip every other hour,
What would be day and would be night?
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Cynthia Onukwugha
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Cynthia Onukwugha 17 February 2010

Thank you! I appreciate the comment.

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Aneto Emmanuel 15 February 2010

Concise and direct. I like it. Inspiring and mind-boggling I enjoyed it.

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 19 January 2009

i am moer than speechless! ! ! ! this poem is tooo good for words! ! ! !

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Micheal Udenyi 27 December 2008

WOW this is an immagination out of the world you ve gone beyond my mirrors of thought I love this piece of art ============================== You would have been an immaginary spirit walking the tolls of the earth's crust no home, no hope, no goal. THANK GOD FOR YOUR PARENTS

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<font color=black>Nagourta 13 December 2008

If that was the case then I would be sad and lonely and use my god powers to recreate the universe(with minor tweaks) ... Oh, and I would appreciate it if you didn't thank me in advance, I think it is a really cheap way to force others to read your poetry.

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Ujwal Bastakoti 12 December 2008

nice imagination! i never imagine like this b4. well expressed

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Joey Rodriguez 11 December 2008

Great poem I like the idea you put in to this one 10+ keep writing My regards Joey

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Hey Chinthia! We live in a wonderful world! Thanks God! A world thought in your poem won't be a very pleasant place to be lived! Great poem! Well done!

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Jagannath rao Adukuri 09 December 2008

nice poem, cynthia: thanks for sharing

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Wow this would be horrible LOL... I don't think i would live well.. This is written well... Makes people think thank you for sharing.. ~Krista~

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