If the sky was green and the grass was blue,
And the sun was black and the water was white,
And the earth would flip every hour, and the moon would flip every other hour,
What would be day and would be night?
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Concise and direct. I like it. Inspiring and mind-boggling I enjoyed it.
i am moer than speechless! ! ! ! this poem is tooo good for words! ! ! !
WOW this is an immagination out of the world you ve gone beyond my mirrors of thought I love this piece of art ============================== You would have been an immaginary spirit walking the tolls of the earth's crust no home, no hope, no goal. THANK GOD FOR YOUR PARENTS
If that was the case then I would be sad and lonely and use my god powers to recreate the universe(with minor tweaks) ... Oh, and I would appreciate it if you didn't thank me in advance, I think it is a really cheap way to force others to read your poetry.
nice imagination! i never imagine like this b4. well expressed
Great poem I like the idea you put in to this one 10+ keep writing My regards Joey
Hey Chinthia! We live in a wonderful world! Thanks God! A world thought in your poem won't be a very pleasant place to be lived! Great poem! Well done!
Wow this would be horrible LOL... I don't think i would live well.. This is written well... Makes people think thank you for sharing.. ~Krista~
Thank you! I appreciate the comment.