Environs And We Comments

A wonderful composition bringing out an elemental truth! Best wishes.

An interesting write with a great message, unfortunately we humans have gone beyond all reasoning and therefore are digging our own roots. It is not the nature that is at risk here, as it'll always find ways to find new balances, we are playing with our own existence. A very urgent message and warning, thanks for sharing!

Who are we? What is our very essense in this humanity? Have we done our part to partake and take charge in the world we live? Questions arises in this wonderful piece...Brilliance and thanks for sharing this social awareness piece.

A very important message to the society- quite insensitive society to environmental protection! Thanks for sharing!

I agree with the comment byYoonoos Peerbocus on this poem. Thank you for highlighting envoronmental concerns through this forum.

This science you teach is well displayed poetically laided out yet systemically named the environs evolve as you mix and match I like your style and I will be back..

Despite the seeming complexity of life as it is now lived, the basic elemental core remains constant as the northern star - earth, fire water air and space. We express them through the yoga, they inspire us in our penning and they will ultimately outlive all the computers and ipods and 'labor saving' devices of the twenty first century. Profound words from a curious soul. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Poem of nature elemen balance where a man could do for better their life, nice poem.

the more we move away from basics the more the basic elements are disturbed, , , but so is life? ? ?

its kind off a power packed punch..right to r head...

Like the thought process behind this. Agree about the elements, there is an ayurverdic theme in this (I think?) . Good post. HG: -) xx

we've a lot to learn from tribal comminities in this regard....

Ancient wisdom masterly inserted into the modern environment. Very well penned!

Men who lived in ancient days Found out five basic truths Earth fire water air and sky Elements five this way! poetry excels with its message of ancient Inidian philosophy(truth of all truth) five souls, poet keep it simply for us

A Timeless Truth! Well expressed!

Great topic. If you're good to nature, nature is good to you. We should respect her much more. Sad to see how much bad we're doing. A very good poem.

Very much topical! Great message to the society! Congratulations. You will find such thoughts in many of my poems. Kindly go through when time permits.

kesaw. this is such a nice topic to write about. thanks for sharing. awarness, is very important. Environmental protection is our forthmost duty. i agree with you. very well composed verses.

We should worship nature by protecting and respecting her, and that should be the fundamental belief of everyone. Thanks for this one.

Environment pollution is the order of the day. Global warming is another talk of the world. Your poem is timely to draw the attention of the Readers to this subject.