Environmental Worries Comments

Quite Excellent. Very Humorous. Very Vivid. It goes beyond Lion King and Madagascar much closer to Animal Farm. It's a Keeper.

Thanks all, very much appreciated. It is very uplifting to have great poets read my stuff. I did change the N-word, as I thought that Max was challenging me into finding a rhyme (there are three more options) . H

I like your comic writing, Herbert, it has a charming way of putting the aforementioned (by Raynette) message across. I'm not too sure the 'N-word' is going to get you too many adherents, at least here in America. Dr. Doolittle & Huckleberry Finn had the excuse that they were written when consciousness had not yet come to certain matters. I do know what it's like when rhyme-fruit for a line is scarce.

This is delightful...a message, but with so much fun and excellent rhymes. I loved it. Raynette

Thank you, I like threes. Even from cowards.