Saturday, December 9, 2023

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Rating: 4.7

As I wake up in the morning I saw the sunshine in the window As I go into the garden, I saw the flowers as they grow.

The trees in the mountain Gives us fresh air to inhale, It gives us water every day, And fulfilling life in every way.
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Bri Edwards 06 January 2024

This poem is 'safe to publish' on PH, AND I'm sure many readers will enjoy it! bri : ) ****

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2024

I give 4 stars, but NOT for the grammar; I believe carelessness, lack of sufficient proofreading & probably some inexperience using English leaves the poem 'sprinkled' with grammatical errors. But is quite worthy of being a Member Poem of the Day. : )

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