Friday, March 17, 2006

Entrenched Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the trenches we wait
Rain pouring down
Our mud-soaked uniforms
Pasted to our bones
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Laurence Overmire
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Uriah Hamilton 17 March 2006

Thanks for this one, there is too much war sadness! !

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Charles Chaim Wax 17 March 2006

such soft smooth words almost peaceful until the final words crash with utter brutality into the mind time for tears a strong work

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