Tuesday, April 12, 2005
Entrancing Eyes Comments
Rating: ★4.7
I was trodding through a lonely path in my life
A broken heart; A wretched mind
A time when love didn’t exist anymore
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7/23/2025 7:56:53 PM # 1.0.0
Yes, entrancing. I would replace at least one of the 'walked out the door' with 'missed my door' 'past my door' passed my door or similar. Needs a bit of crescendo change. Enjoyed it. Is he still there? H