Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Entombed Comments

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Here I sit all alone
Feeling down, feeling blue
For no reason known
Tears falling right on cue
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 September 2017

A superb poem, written in soulful appealing wordings, great rhyming n flow indeed. I think if we didn't have dejection in life we wouldn't be good at poetry, poetry is fed by the ink of some sadness usually. So kudos n keep writing. So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will Read n comment my latest poem titled, ' stand tall and proud yet humbly bow' So Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u too will Read n comment my latest poem titled, ' stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'

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Tony Karas 28 September 2017

Thank you for comment.

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Lyn Paul 05 April 2017

You have given an insight to this pain and unknown for many. The many great writes that you have penned would be wonderful in a book with photographs. They may help others. Thank you Tony for this heartfelt write.

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Tony Karas 05 April 2017

Thank you Lyn. Your comments are always greatly appreciated. A book you think? I did put many of them into a free book on smashwords but it's not illustrated. It hasn't seen much interest. Less than 100 downloads and it's free.

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