Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Entombed Comments

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What is this?
I think as I awake
thrust from a most gentle state
into what I can only presume
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~ Jon London ~ 15 April 2009

A fine word choice delivers it well, nice work

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Heath Gunn 25 March 2009

i really enjoyed your poem, i especially like your turn of phrase, nicely put together! !

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