Sunday, October 30, 2011

Entity Of Love Comments

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</>Then I was quite unhappy
My mind too was gloomy.
A melancholia did captivate me
And the universe was hating me.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Anjandev Roy 25 September 2019

And enjoy laurels quite sweet........lovely. Beautifully penned.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

After a long you came slowly You were sad oh my dearie. From me you begged a promise Not to brood for own demise.//// and the LOVE returned at last; its the true true intuition of LOVE // beautiful poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

And in sleep i did pray. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Remaining quiet unhappy is a common human nature. But on realization of self life proceeds towards God and becomes so sweet and this brings happiness. Eternity speaks the tale of life cycle. Very finely; y touched poem shared. Interesting, wise and nice with excellent theme....10

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Vipins Puthooran 30 October 2011

Wonderful poem with lots of emotions in the first part and love at the last... I like this poem... Really good write

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