Entity And Nonentity Comments

Liked the style and usage of words. ----------------- 'When my mother was young, she would Play with me, her face showed her love. But that was far away, when I was someone.' ----------------- I too face the same issue!

No Homeric persona am I, not a protagonist Just an entity on the brink Of nonentitiness So often I also face these lines in my inner space.....liked the thought inherent.

I love the wording and the question of where an existence begins or ends, or what it transforms into..really intriguing!

Rani, much to like in your well written piece. Regards, Ian