Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Entitlement Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me everything
I deserve it
I'm hungry now
Why don't you serve it
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Carl Roussell 08 August 2019

No wasted words here - really good description of greed. Like the last two lines! A 10

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Jane Campion 07 August 2019

A great poem on greed. Thank you for your beautiful comments.

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