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Hi Dear poet, I just read your note. Found that every other version is another poem altogether. Nice

Made a revisit today. Loved this poem more..

In the answer of this question there is a great philosophy. Brief but beautiful poem is cutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.10

Complex thing, derived from many simple and simplest things... To understand, its not to see its complexities but to tackle the easy part first. But sometimes i do carefree in certain things because its better to not understand much on it... Politics, i know a lil but never interested... I leave to ones who expert...bad me haha

my eyes thirst for more poetry ur FIRST

Hmmm. Yes it is when one is an observer. This world remains complex if observer is also the part of the subject, though he is understanding and gathering all the sacred wisdom. Your poem is perfect with that question mark, i think.

Another astounding Senryu! The other versions are other poems unto themselves. M.J., I sincerely believe that you should start up a poetry philosophy class. It would be a first from a first class poet!

i wish i was simple i would have an easier time with the world

if only u could compose at least 16 lines at a stretch you will become CANADIAN POET THE BEST