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even adding a healthy tan he'd never had, living, gave him back for keeps the old automatic smile with nothing behind it, winding the whole show up with a nice ride.. very fine poem indeed. tony

Wow, no talent and a low IQ.

Very dramatic expressions! Congratulation for being on member poem place.

Life rises from silence to experience all the bleeps and buzz, the heightened movements and hustle -bustle and lastly goes back to a place where there is complete SILENCE.A profound write, thanks for sharing.

Such a profound poem by Donald Bruce Dawe👍👍👍

He was old enough! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

First of all CONGRATS for your Poem of the DAY, dear Bruce. I have enjoyed a very lot this breath-taking poem. A 10 for this powerful poem. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Sylvia Frances Chan from the Netherlands.

Such an interesting write. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for POD.

The man who was once a legendary and notable to many is now six feet down in eternal home seems interested to nobody...........this is the way of life.......very touching and excellently crafted.........thanks for sharing