Enter The Poem Comments

'Come in enter the poem live in symphony of life's distances rendered in notes of trembling nuances' I enjoyed this piece.

this is a flowing and delicious meta text

i don't know where to begin w/ this. Evocative imagery, and thought-provoking ideas. Starts with a distinct rhythm, gels into rhyme, ends w/ a break in form that suggests the sometimes wandering spirit of the poet's muse. Not sure, but i think this is a masterpiece.

i loved this piece! it's marvelous.you're very talented with words.

good diction...clever usage of words...presentation enjoyable...well done thanks

Ah yes - a good poem pulls the reader inside it, where they discover its nuances, its dark corners, its bright lights, quiet whispers - the everything it has to offer. The difference between a poem with depth and one that just sits idly on the page, no matter how well constructed the latter may be, is, to me, the measure of quality. Poetry is and ever will be, should be and ought, more than than the simple act of writing a poem. I fell in to this one - and found myself in a world both fantastic and precise. An excellent combination and one not easily achieved. Great work here, Mark. Christine

Mard, there is stunning wordplay here and the rhyme workds. It is a colourful poem and draws the reader in... forcing them to want to enter the poem.

remarkable, great work, original

Imaginatively well done. An absolutely excellent write.

hmmm....... a different and a good work.. :)

this is great...excellent ideas...loved this part: 'Come in enter the poem live in symphony of life's distances rendered in notes of trembling nuances ' nice work

Mark, i entered the poem you wrote tonight, i found a place to hang my hat The company was a delight, i think i like this place - i'm at! *10*! ! Unique and capturing poem my friend! Thad

Repetition and sound work well here-a welcoming conversational tone.

Good flow in this Mark, so glad you entered this poem,10 Lynda xx