Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Enter My Abyss Comments

Rating: 3.1

So much screaming and never ending blood
Sitting and watching as the line for the torture
Its finally your turn and they string you up onto a barbed wire fence with wire around my ankles, wrists, and throat
They stick giant spikes through your stomach and into your spine
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Kevin Fisher
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Bernard Snyder 28 September 2015

Great poem. It does sounds like scenes from a movie! Congrats!

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Oluwatomisin Eshton 28 September 2015

just words and it was like something out of an horror movie

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Darkness J 18 September 2009

Great poem and great vocabulary and I just felt the strenght of 'I dare you' :)

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Private Girl 15 April 2009

i like this, Your awesome :)

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Breeanna Mcelmurry 21 March 2009

every nice work: 0. keep it up kk

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Amber Kangas 20 March 2009

well written it makes you feel as if you are really there and it reminds me of the way i feel alot of the time

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Pandora Chaos 12 March 2009

i love this poem, great images come to mind as u read this poem. awsome, my kind of poem

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Kevin Fisher

Kevin Fisher

Canton, Ohio
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